The general feedback of the essay is good. Mike said I got some good points but most of the chapters need illustration to support and also some spelling mistakes. Since the essay is still in progress, I want to add in pictures afterwards and focus mainly on typing from now. I noticed that i would take quite a while to finish the whole essay and also needed to be proof read by someone as well. Mike also said I need to continue linking my questions to the examples and have to start writing the practical as soon as possible. I think I am on schedule and very up to date. I nearly finish my animation so I would be able to start the practical chapter before Christmas break. What I need to improve is probably the speed of writing which could be done by organising the chapter before typing because I do babble a lot once started. Also remember to link back to the questions I stated which could be achieved by sticking a memo note on my laptop!
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